The concept that mainly intrigued me was that part when you said that the fence borders happiness and the concentration camps that the Jewish were held captive in. It interested me because the whole idea of all of the happiness and live outside of the camp is well represented or shown. I also like how you added real life pictures of the Jewish people that were stuck inside the concentration camps. If someone didn't know how it was for the people inside concentration camps then those pictures would well educate them on how miserable the Jewish were.
I think that you did very well on your butterfly, and very well on explaining the different parts of your butterfly. Your explanations are well written and informative. I like how everything on your butterfly has it's own meaning, like the dried up leaves. I like how you included real pictures. I also like how you had a light side of the butterfly and a darker side.
You did a really good job on your butterfly because I can tell there was a lot of work put into it, and you exceeded the fourteen required tags. All of your tags were really well explained, and I liked how you added some pictures to explanations. The river that you had on your butterfly to represent the different paths it can take was a really unique idea. I also noticed you split it in half to show the two sides of the poem which was also a good idea that can be shown to represent a good and bad side. Great job on your butterfly.
Hi Jared! I love your butterfly, you could tell it took a lot of time and effort to make it, so it showed you were concerned and on your project. You did a great job on representing two different worlds; one outside of the camp and one inside the camp. You also exceeded fourteen tags which was great because we could really get an understanding of your butterfly and poem. Along with Justin, one thing that intrigued me was the fence and river. I thought it was a very unique and creative idea to represent that as the barrier and different worlds. One thing to make the blog post exceeding perfect, I suggest, is to include your poem.
Jared your butterfly is amazing! It looks like it took a lot of time and effort in the butterfly and the analysis. You really went into detail with your butterfly, you did everything from the colors and the border all the way to the dried leaves. You did all of this wonderfully. However the only thing I suggest adding is your poem.
Hey Jared! I can totally tell that you spent a lot of time and effort into this, I mean it just looks absolutely beautiful! I really liked how you had split the butterfly, one happy side, and the other a dark negative side. I liked how you had explained the river, that went into both sides of the butterfly. How the river could flow both ways. I found that really unique and creative. Great job!
The concept that mainly intrigued me was that part when you said that the fence borders happiness and the concentration camps that the Jewish were held captive in. It interested me because the whole idea of all of the happiness and live outside of the camp is well represented or shown. I also like how you added real life pictures of the Jewish people that were stuck inside the concentration camps. If someone didn't know how it was for the people inside concentration camps then those pictures would well educate them on how miserable the Jewish were.
ReplyDeleteI think that you did very well on your butterfly, and very well on explaining the different parts of your butterfly. Your explanations are well written and informative. I like how everything on your butterfly has it's own meaning, like the dried up leaves. I like how you included real pictures. I also like how you had a light side of the butterfly and a darker side.
ReplyDeleteYou did a really good job on your butterfly because I can tell there was a lot of work put into it, and you exceeded the fourteen required tags. All of your tags were really well explained, and I liked how you added some pictures to explanations. The river that you had on your butterfly to represent the different paths it can take was a really unique idea. I also noticed you split it in half to show the two sides of the poem which was also a good idea that can be shown to represent a good and bad side. Great job on your butterfly.
ReplyDeleteHi Jared! I love your butterfly, you could tell it took a lot of time and effort to make it, so it showed you were concerned and on your project. You did a great job on representing two different worlds; one outside of the camp and one inside the camp. You also exceeded fourteen tags which was great because we could really get an understanding of your butterfly and poem. Along with Justin, one thing that intrigued me was the fence and river. I thought it was a very unique and creative idea to represent that as the barrier and different worlds. One thing to make the blog post exceeding perfect, I suggest, is to include your poem.
ReplyDeleteJared your butterfly is amazing! It looks like it took a lot of time and effort in the butterfly and the analysis. You really went into detail with your butterfly, you did everything from the colors and the border all the way to the dried leaves. You did all of this wonderfully. However the only thing I suggest adding is your poem.
ReplyDeleteHey Jared! I can totally tell that you spent a lot of time and effort into this, I mean it just looks absolutely beautiful! I really liked how you had split the butterfly, one happy side, and the other a dark negative side. I liked how you had explained the river, that went into both sides of the butterfly. How the river could flow both ways. I found that really unique and creative. Great job!
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