Wednesday, March 25, 2015

Poetry Reflection 3/26/14

My Reflection
Prompt: 
1- Poetry can be a vital, real part of everyone's life. What place or importance does poetry have in my own life? Does poetry belong to everyone? How do I know?
2- How does the life and experiences of a poet affect the poem he/she creates?

          Poetry has importance in my life because some poetry I can relate too. Some of the poetry I read can relate to some life experiences I've had so far. Poetry has importance in my life because some poetry that I read can relate or give me some sort of feeling. Poetry can change the mood of a person, such as if you read a poem about motivation. You may begin to feel more motivated towards yourself. There are a lot of ways of why poetry is important in my life, but these are the top two ways. This is why I think that poetry does has some importance in my own life.

          Poetry does belong to everyone. They're more than a thousand poems out there and there is at least one poem each person can relate too. Poetry belongs to everyone because everyone has something that they can relate too or maybe they can write poetry themselves. Maybe the experience that person felt made them write it down on paper. A lot of poets poems are about their own life and experiences. Each person has experienced something and they can probably relate to it through poetry/poems. Poetry can also change the mood of someone. Also some people might read poetry so that they can feel better if they are feeling sad or down. So, I think poetry does belong to everyone.


           The life and experiences of a poet can affect the poem he/she creates because maybe their life and or experiences are the reason of why they wrote that poem. Some poets throughout their life have experienced a lot of stuff and they began to write about that in their poems. For example Edger Allan Poe, he had a lot of bad experiences throughout his life and in most of his poems he talks about them. Life experiences can affect a lot to the kind of poems the poet creates. For example, if they have had a really bad experience like a relative died. In their poem they might talk about something dark or related to death. Another example is if the poet had something really good happen that day like they got a gift from a really close friend. In their poem they might talk about how friendship and kindness is really valuable. This is how the life and experiences of a poet can affect the poem he/she creates.



"The Whisps" - Nonsense Poem 3/25/15


Monday, March 23, 2015

Spine Poem 3/23/15


"Never fall down
where she went found dreamland, peace like a river"

          I wanted to create a poem that shows to never give up. My poem says "Never fall down" and after that it talks about a dreamland and peace. I wanted my poem explain that if you never fall down and keep going you can find the dreamland with peace like a river. My poem is basically about never giving up on anything and always keep going so that at the end you can find peace and no more problems.

Thursday, March 19, 2015

Found Poem 3/19/15




It doesn't matter
I felt a clutch of apprehension
He didn't take you, he was just tired
Can't believe your father wouldn't want to say good-bye
she heard, she wished
she had not spoken her thoughts
silence followed lengthy
I can't explain
not saying good-bye is a way of saying good-bye
At least he was thinking of me
Is that right?

          The main point of my poem is about saying good-bye. My poem is talking about how difficult it to say bye to someone who is leaving you. In my poem it says,"Can't believe your father wouldn't want to say good-bye" and it also says,"not saying good-bye is a way of saying good-bye." These lines explain how her father didn't want to say good-bye to her because it just was to difficult to leave her so it instead of saying good-bye to her in person he said it by just leaving her without saying a word. My poem talks about how there are two different ways of saying good-bye and why it is so difficult to say it.

Thinglink Interactive Poetry

I commented on Evie, Nick, and Omar's blogs

Wednesday, March 18, 2015

Blog for 3/16/15

Two Voice Poem
Thomas and Minho

I am a newbie, but I am ready for the maze      
                                                              I have ran through the maze countless times      
I am/was the clue you guys needed to survive
                                                  We survived the maze     I was your leader for several                                                                                                          years

I never thought I had worked with WICKED
                                                                They had locked us up for most of our lives

From my memories I can remember some parts of the Flare
                                                                       I had no idea that was even possible

WICKED has locked us up again
                                                           Another nightmare is about to begin

We have to pass the Scorch Trials just to find the cure to the Flare
                                                            Is the cure real? I don’t believe them anymore

My tattoo says that, I’m the one to be killed
                                                                   My tattoo says that, I’m am the leader

Can we survive in this kind of desert?
                                                   Surviving will be difficult        This is gonna be harder                                                                                                          than the Maze

If we find other people, let’s talk to them
                                                    You can trust no one               No, we have to fight                                                                                                 No one can be trusted

Will we be able to cross 100 miles in two weeks? 
                                                                            Yes, we can do this… to survive

We are like rats in a labyrinth
                                               We are being tested                     Once we find them we                                                                                           will make them pay for this

The Cranks we encounter could kill us or make us fall behind
                                                                                 We will be fast and avoid them

Will we be able to find group B?
                                                                               Let’s not focus on that right now 

We will take Brenda and Jorge with us they might help us
                                                                        Or they might make things worse for us

They can kill us if we don’t bring them along, they outnumber us
                                                                                        Fine, but I won’t trust them

Me and Brenda will travel underground because of the explosion
                                                            Me and the rest will travel by foot above ground

Cranks have taken me and Brenda away
                                                                                 We will fight and find you guys

Thank you for saving our lives Minho
                                                                   You’re welcome,I got your back this time

Group B and Teresa have captured me
                                                                                  This time you are on your own,                                                                                         you gotta catch up with us

Teresa is a betrayer, I will never be able to trust her again
                                                                                             I have never trusted her                                                      but look we have survived through another nightmare

                                         We have survived the Scorch Trials




Friday, March 13, 2015

3rd Quarter Reflections

My Reflection


          From all the books I have read this quarter my favorite was Go Ask Alice by Anonymous. This is my favorite book because it taught me a lot about life and how if you take drugs you can go from being a good student to a person who sells drugs to minor kids. In my 40 book challenge I'm currently on book 21. The book I am reading right now is The Scorch Trials by James Dashner, and it is my 21st book in the 40 book challenge. Something that I have accomplished from the beginning of the new year that I am proud of is the 40 book challenge. I never thought I would go over half, but now I have accomplished that. Now I am on my 21st book and I'm proud of that.

           The area I think I made my biggest improvement in Language Arts was writing. At the beginning I wasn't so good at writing paragraphs with supporting details, textual evidence, topic sentence, etc. My blog since August have improved a lot. At the beginning of the year I wasn't so good at writing summaries or things about my book, but throughout the year I have improved a lot. I am better at writing summaries and with a topic sentence. Some strategies that have helped me are on how to write a paragraph with fully supported details and a topic sentence. Those strategies are the ones that have helped me the most.


           The most challenging part of 3rd quarter for me was the poetry. I am not as good with poetry and I am really bad at coming up with verses that rhyme. My research skills have improved a lot too. At the beginning I didn't know how to use MLA citation but now I use it for all of my projects. I have also learned a lot about the world so far. I have learned a lot about Sweden and India. In Sweden it is almost like the US but the climates are different and they have different customs. The same thing goes to India. My pen pals have helped me learned a lot about their countries.

Thursday, March 12, 2015

Music less listened too (Extended Poem) 3/12/15



Two different music genres
Imagine Dragons or Prince Royce
There I sat and thought which to chose
Either Latin music, bachata to be exact
Or Alternative Rock, I couldn’t choose either


I listened to one song of each genre
Each had a different mood
Prince Royce seemed like the better choice
He is well known around Latin America
He is pretty famous and has a lot of catchy songs


Imagine Dragons aren’t as famous,
they have only released 3 albums so far
compared to Prince Royce who has released a lot of singles
Imagine Dragon has released a new album just a couple weeks ago
It is called “Smoke and Mirrors”
The title to me seemed really tempting but,
Imagine Dragon’s song aren’t as well known


For some people Prince Royce seemed the obvious choice
He’s really famous, well known, and his songs are really catchy to dance too.
Two different music genres, yet I chose Imagine Dragons
I have listened to most of their songs, learned the lyrics, and learned the titles
They have become my favorite band ever since
I chose the band less listened too
But with the best lyrics

Wednesday, March 11, 2015

Bio-Poem 3/11/15



Thomas 


Intelligent, strong, adventurous, brave
A character in Teresa's story 
Lover of adventure, Teresa, and answers
Who notices when something is wrong and they have to act quickly
Who feels guilt when he kills a Crank, happiness when they were safe once again, and awkward when he's around the new girl, Brenda
Who learns other reasons why people are there, who is WICKED, and he learns who to trust and who not to trust
Who used to think that Cranks were crazy people but now knows that not every Crank is crazy... yet
Major character in The Scorch Trials
A book that brings suspense, adventure, and betrayal.

I commented on Diana, Sonny, Saul's blogs.

Wednesday, March 4, 2015

Lost In The Past 3/4/15


Searching for something that may never be known,
mental disturbance turns a heart back to stone.

Create memories alone in your head,

holding you hostage as you lay in your bed.

Fits of despair have blinded your sight,

awaken to find you are losing the fight.

Rays of sunlight lead the way,

hurts from the past only keep you away.

Deception has caused your faith to stray,

simple gestures are life's way to say...

Release the burden that's wanted your stay,

crumble your thoughts and throw them away.

Discover a strength to start a new page,

no longer alone slipped from the cage.

Bruised and broken you now can see 

a glimpse of hope that may set you free.


I commented on Giovanna, Joseph, and Omar's blog